Why haven’t you come to see me?You told me you would. Is it that much better on the other side to pay me a visit? I hope you have a good excuse, because I feel like you’ve forgotten me. I remember hearing those words, “Till Death do us part” at our wedding. It made me feel sad, even though it was the happiest day of my life. The thought of loosing you forever was an unbearable thought and now it’s the only one I have left.
Simple. Exquisitely so.
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Thanks kindly
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Very very poignant. Very very touching. You are developing a fine control in your writing. It is enviable 😊
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I always learn new words from you wonderful. Thanks for all the encouragement, we should work together
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We certainly should.
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It’s a piece that will continue to remain beautiful till the end of time. At least of both characters in the piece
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God bless you
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Nice.
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God bless you Patricia
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Thank you. May he bless you as well.
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Wow, thank you for this! This was beautifully written!
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Your sweet. I’m glad you liked it
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